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1)  In conclusion, freedom of speech is a highly dangerous matter. Some people support it, while
others do not. Peoples should be carefull when expressing their opinion or thoughts taking in
acount what the outcomes might be.







2)  Doctor’s duty is very moral. Doctors should follow some compulsory rules in treating with
patients. they should be respectfull, helpful and carefull.

Some patients prefer the doctor who respect their wishes. In the other hand, some people prefer the
doctor who does what he find what is the best.








3)  Majority of doctors refuse patient’s demands for several reasons. to begin with, doctors are
specialized who have the ability to apply a suitable and strong decision. For instance, if a person
have a Fatal disease he can not choose to die by mercy killing because the function of doctors
appears at that moment.






4)  For over 50 years Palestinians suffered unstoppabee war. Every meaning of life in the
Palestinian house was lost. Israel went back for its old home, saying “nothing is going to stop
me.” No debate it is the first home for Israelis. Nevertheless, we are looking for peace, should
one of these parties abandon, or they can live together, and fit in same socity?







5) On the other hand, patients are not medical experts, they may be not able to make educated
decisions. So, doctors should not do what they want because they come from different societies or
they might not have education or they would like to do what other people do. In that cases, doctors
have the right to help them or not, and to make judgment about them because they do not know the
best solution for them.








6)  One important thing for those who believes that freedom of speech is the most important human
right, is that the human right of being alive, live a secure life without any threats or fear, the
right to have a shelter or a home, and the right of having a goodhealthy life.







7)   Some people say that freedom of speech is the most important right for human beings. Actually,
this is true. It’s not the right of some leaders and governments to have a fully control on peoples
minds and thoughts. simply because those people were born free, no one has the right to treat them
as slaves.







8)   Nowadays a lot of palestinians killed every day by the Israelis army in a matter of land. The
war between Israel and Palestine started around a hundred years ago but it was not a huge case for
the rest of the world as we can see now.








9)    In conclusion, people should have this right at any country in the world and also able to be
able to write in the newspapers any article to discuss and views to share with the society, because
freedom of speech must be found in the media as well.