Correct the students' use of linking words (in bold) in the texts below.
Text 1:
Nowadays, numerous college students choose to get a part-time job to rich college
life. There is no doubt that taking part-time job would bring plenty of benefits.
Above all, part-time job can make our life more enjoyable and meaningful; that is to
say, it can add more colour to the same day in and day out of the life. What’s more,
part-time job can make we college students get in touch with the society earlier. We
would know what the real world is. And some college students live an extravagant
life with a pocket money given by their parents, which keeps them from the hardship
of earning money in the real world. More importantly, part-time job can help
students gain some useful experience to approach the society and establish some
connections in advance. Besides, because not every family is wealthy, getting a parttime
job can lighten their burden.
As every coin has two sides, there are still some disadvantages in taking a part-time
job. On the one hand, it occupies some of the students’ spare time and the time in
studying would decrease, maybe it would keep our attention from focusing on
learning.
Therefore, our study would be affected in a certain extent. In a word, there are
always two sides about all the things, what we need to do is to keep the balance of
both sides. Undoubtedly, for college students, part-time job can not only improve
the social connection, but also get plenty of precious experience. Therefore I think
college students should take part-time jobs.
Text 2:
[...] These are excellent suggestions; I would really like to see them in action right
away. But if pupils will work more in school, so will teachers. And their burden is
already heavy as it is. To make this suggestion work, schools must employ more
teachers so there will be a tutor for every pupil who needs one. One of the reasons
why pupils do not learn as much as needed is the fact that there is not enough
teachers. And schools do not employ more teachers because they cannot afford it.
So the question is how this could be done economically [...]
Adapted from Walkova (2019)