Analysis of academic
review article;
MPNs as Inflammatory Diseases: The Evidence,
Consequences, and Perspectives

Hans Carl Hasselbalch and Mads Emil Bjørn
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Professor Hasselbalch in his well-formed academic article about haematological
neoplasms and their connection with immunity and its disorders. This comes under the
main purpose of connecting tumours in general with immunity disorders which can be
the reason or the consequence. This article is directed to his audience of students,
scientists and experts in the medical field.
The writing style of this article is critical and the hedging language were taken into
consideration as the word “may” for example was used over 45 times in the article, and
other modal verbs and clauses were used under the functional classification “Mitigator”.
The cohesion and coherence of this article is significant and appears in every part
and in the whole piece of the work served the complexity of the information in the whole
article to make it comprehensible unit.
Away from information complexity, the language objectivity and complexity are
clear with the passive voice used almost all over the work, short sentence-based
paragraphs, and the use of lexical words and variation.
The content of this work is serious clarifying the link between the myeloproliferative
neoplasms and immunological process, the organisation of the informations and the ideas
from the introduction till the last word of the conclusion is clear and well planed, the
article is grammatically error-free, and the academic language which was used accurately,
all these features confer the formality on the article.
Finally the scientific merit of any academic article is supported by the sources used,
in this article the summarizing of many studies and researches were shown to support the
main idea of the article, and by using near 150 references the scientific merit is
considerable.
Mohamed Hussam Aswad
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