Writing Module Noun/Pronoun Agreement Noun/pronoun agreement is when the pronoun agrees with the noun it refers to—in gender and number. A pronoun refers to a noun that was mentioned earlier in the text. This noun is called the antecedent. For example: The employee read the review on her performance. Her is the pronoun and refers to the antecedent, employee. Bob and Harry travel a lot for their jobs. Their is the pronoun and refers to the antecedent, Bob and Harry. The pronoun must agree with the noun it refers to—in gender and number. This is called noun/pronoun agreement. You often can trust your ear when it comes to detecting pronoun errors. Read the example out loud, and see if you can determine whether or not it is incorrect because of the way it sounds. The executive board hesitates to punish their own members for ethics violations. Read the example again out loud: The executive board hesitates to punish their own members for ethics violation. To your ear, the use of their should have sounded awkward. Executive board is singular, so the pronoun should have been its. Read the following out loud. The executive board hesitates to punish its own members for ethics violations. This should sound better to your ear. Noun/pronoun agreement sometimes results in two common types of errors. Noun-Pronoun Agreement Version 1.0 1 of 3 Ask yourself the following question when you proofread your work: Is it completely clear to whom or what the pronoun is referring in the sentence? Error 1: The pronoun reference to the antecedent is vague or ambiguous. The first common error with noun/pronoun agreement occurs when the pronoun reference to the antecedent is vague or ambiguous. For example: Although the motorcycle hit the tree, it was not damaged. Is it referring to the motorcycle or the tree? I don’t think they should show violence on the TV. Who are they? If you put this sheet of instructions in your notebook, you can refer to it. Is it referring to the sheet or the notebook? When you proofread your writing, ask yourself: Is it completely clear to whom (or to what) the pronoun is referring? Error 2: It is unclear whether the pronoun is singular or plural. The second common error with noun/pronoun agreement occurs with pronoun number. Should you use the singular pronoun or the plural pronoun? For example: The average male moviegoer expects to see at least one scene of violence per film, and they are seldom disappointed. The pronoun they is referencing the average male moviegoer. They is plural and moviegoer is singular. This results in an error in the pronoun number. Noun-Pronoun Agreement Version 1.0 2 of 3 Another question to ask yourself when you proofread your work: Does the pronoun agree in number with the noun to which it is referring? The correct sentence should read: The average male moviegoer expects to see at least one scene of violence per film, and he is seldom disappointed. Singular pronouns include: I, me other each he, him mine everyone she, her yours everybody it his, hers nobody each this no one another either neither one Plural pronouns include: we, us those they, them these both The following pronouns can be singular or plural, depending on the context in which they are used: some who none which ours what you that When you proofread you writing, ask yourself: Does the pronoun agree in number with the noun to which it refers? To recap the two rules of noun/pronoun agreement. Rule 1: The noun to which the pronoun refers is clear. Rule 2: The number of the pronoun matches the number of the noun. If you follow the basic rules provided when writing and proofreading your papers, you should have no problem with noun/pronoun agreement. Return to the Graduate Success Prep Program available through the myFranklin Web site and do the exercises for this module. Noun-Pronoun Agreement Version 1.0 3 of 3