The History of Our World in 18 Minutes

David Christian tell[D1]  the tale of the entire universe. He emphasizes the general tendency of
the universe[D2]  from order and structure to a lack of order and structure. According to him,
however, the universe can create complexities,[D3]  but with great difficulty.

Christian shows the complexity of the entire history of the universe – from the Big Bang 13 billion
year ago to the life on Earth. Each stage of complexity creates something completely new but
fragile.

Life on Earth is associated with the role of DNA, which gathers new ways of creating life.
After[D4]  the demise of the dinosaurs, people appeared. DNA has created organisms that can learn
in real time and collect information. This ability is called “collective learning” and it plays
role[D5]  in our everyday lives. However, collective learning is a very powerful force and it is
not clear whether we can control it as humans. Attention must be paid to the opportunities and
threats the humanity face[D6]  in this “threshold moment”, where is our [D7] future fragile and
unclear.


Excellent grammar, vocabulary and ability to express.
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 [D1]tells

 [D2]here we lack a verb – the general tendency of the universe TO MOVE / TO PROGRESS from …

 [D3]no comma

 [D4]Here we need some linker: Therefore, after…

 [D5]a role

 [D6]faces

 [D7]the – yeah, British would avoid a personal pronoun even here