Fatma Orhan ,UČO: 429641


                         Feedback on Hana Podobová’s draft of final essay


 In your draft you perfectly stated what you are supposed to write in your final paper. In
addition, from what you wrote in your draft I assume you will focus more on the economic base of
the cosmopolitan structure in your final paper. I think you can also consider the impact of the
cosmopolitan structure on national culture because the cosmopolitan structure consists of many
different cultures and these cultures integrate into each other as time passes by. This situation
is dangerous for the local culture. You can include this question, too: How is the local culture of
Bratislava affected by the cosmopolitan structure?