Feedback for Goran Vujnovic’s paper


The title of this paper is very interesting to me. I think it has absolute sound meaning as title
has two parts including (1) influence of religion and culture and (2) integration. Here first part
seems independent variable and another dependent.

This paper has identified the background properly especially problems. It is considered as a
current problem. There are also specific questions related to problems and solutions. This paper
identifies the research questions related to education systems, institutional problems-mosque,
problems of folkways-clothing and its effect and violence. Here also emphasized on the reaction of
domestic peoples as consequence of migrant’s activities. Moreover, western government strategies
are also emphasized to mitigate problems as research question.

But this paper should emphasize on exact hypothesis, theories and structure.  Additionally, here it
is needed to mention specific countries in western society where the problem exists as all
countries might not have the same problem. Overall I think it will be a nice paper, if it works
properly.