Comment Sheet for First Drafts (PAGE 1)

  Social Inclusion: Perspectives, Practices, and Challenges within the Visegrad Region (SOC607) ·
                                            Autumn 2017


                                           Student name



                                            Assignment

                                      Reviewer name & e-mail




                                         Research proposal


       STRUCTURE   Appropriate format, logical organization, clear relation between sections


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           CONTENT   Logic of argumentation, quality and quantity of information, detail


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                 STYLE   Vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, citations, originality



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                                          Other comments






                               Questions for the Reviewers to Answer

                                             (PAGE 2)

What is the main topic of this research proposal? What is the main research question? Are they
clear or do they need more clarification?



If this is a persuasive research proposal? How do the authors justify its relevance? Is the
justification sufficient?



How well is the research question grounded in the literature and research done so far? Does the
literature review contain enough information on previous research and relevant theories or
concepts?



What information could help to strengthen the research proposal?




Is the language use good – does the paper “flow” or are there parts that are difficult to
understand? Is the tone appropriate for the assignment and the target audience?