18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 1 Academic Writing in Practice Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 2 Coherence 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 3 Coherence · Why? > The most convincing ideas in the world, expressed in the most beautiful sentences, will not form a readily understadable text unless those ideas are properly connected. > The most convincing ideas in the world, expressed in the most beautiful sentences, will not form a readily understadable text unless those ideas are properly connected. > The most convincing ideas in the world, expressed in the most beautiful sentences, will not form a readily understandable text unless those ideas are properly connected. > The most convincing ideas in the world, expressed in the most beautiful sentences, will not form a readily understandable text unless those ideas are properly connected. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 4 Coherence · Why? > What do you want your text to achieve? > Your text cannot achieve anything if it is not accessible to the reader > Do not assume your readers know everything you know > Unless you provide your reader with a certain amount of guidance, they may lose track of your reasoning 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 5 Coherence · What? > Coherence is the property of unity in a written text that stems from the links among its underlying ideas and from the logical organization and development of its thematic content. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 6 Coherence · What? > Coherence is the result of tying information in your writing together so that connections you have made in your own mind are apparent to the reader. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 7 TEXT YOU READER your (potentially) coherent text TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 8 Post a sign! This way! 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 9 TEXT YOU READER your (amazingly) coherent text TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT your (potentially) coherent text 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 10 Coherence · What? > A well-written text is like honey. > It flows. > It sticks together. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 11 Coherence · What? > A well-written text is like a chain. > Each component links to the next. > Your text is only as strong as its weakest link. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 12 The harder it is to write, the easier it is to read – and vice-versa. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 13 Coherence · How? > How can you guide your reader through your text? 1. Ordering ideas in logical and expected ways 2. Using transitional expressions to interconnect ideas 3. Using parallel forms 4. Repeating key words and phrases as needed 5. Focusing on information flow 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 14 Exercise No. 1a Coherence > Order of Ideas 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 15 Paragraph Coherence > Order of Ideas > The Egyptians were experts at preserving dead bodies by making mummies of them. Mummies several thousand years old have been discovered nearly intact. The skin, hair, teeth, finger- and toenails, and facial features of the mummies were evident. It is possible to diagnose the diseases they suffered in life, such as smallpox and arthritis. The process was remarkably effective. Sometimes apparent were fatal injuries: a middle-aged king died from a blow on the head, for example. Mummification consisted of removing the internal organs, applying natural preservatives inside and out, and then wrapping the bodies in layers of bandages. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 16 Paragraph Coherence > Order of Ideas 1. The Egyptians were experts at preserving dead bodies by making mummies of them. 2. Mummies several thousand years old have been discovered nearly intact. 3. The skin, hair, teeth, finger- and toe-nails, and facial features of the mummies were evident. 4. It is possible to diagnose the diseases they suffered in life, such as smallpox and arthritis. 5. The process was remarkably effective. 6. Sometimes apparent were fatal injuries: a middle-aged king died from a blow on the head, for example. 7. Mummification consisted of removing the internal organs, applying natural preservatives inside and out, and then wrapping the bodies in layers of bandages. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 17 Paragraph Coherence > Order of Ideas 1. The Egyptians were experts at preserving dead bodies by making mummies of them. 7. Mummification consisted of removing the internal organs, applying natural preservatives inside and out, and then wrapping the bodies in layers of bandages. 5. The process was remarkably effective. 2. Mummies several thousand years old have been discovered nearly intact. 3. The skin, hair, teeth, finger- and toe-nails, and facial features of the mummies were evident. 4. It is possible to diagnose the diseases they suffered in life, such as smallpox and arthritis. 6. Sometimes apparent were fatal injuries: a middle-aged king died from a blow on the head, for example. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 18 Exercise No. 1b Coherence > Order of Ideas 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 19 Coherence > Order of Ideas > Each of these factors plays its part in influencing national-level environmental decisions and personal-level environmental values and behaviors. Protection of the environment is needed due to various human activities. Environmental protection is influenced by three interwoven factors: environmental legislation, ethics and education. For environmental protection to become a reality, it is important for societies to develop each of these areas that, together, will inform and drive environmental decisions. Waste production, air pollution, and loss of biodiversity (resulting from the introduction of invasive species and species extinction) are some of the issues related to environmental protection. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 20 Coherence > Order of Ideas 1. Each of these factors plays its part in influencing national-level environmental decisions and personal-level environmental values and behaviors. 2. Protection of the environment is needed due to various human activities. 3. Environmental protection is influenced by three interwoven factors: environmental legislation, ethics and education. 4. For environmental protection to become a reality, it is important for societies to develop each of these areas that, together, will inform and drive environmental decisions. 5. Waste production, air pollution, and loss of biodiversity (resulting from the introduction of invasive species and species extinction) are some of the issues related to environmental protection. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 21 Coherence > Order of Ideas 2. Protection of the environment is needed due to various human activities. 5. Waste production, air pollution, and loss of biodiversity (resulting from the introduction of invasive species and species extinction) are some of the issues related to environmental protection. 3. Environmental protection is influenced by three interwoven factors: environmental legislation, ethics and education. 1. Each of these factors plays its part in influencing national-level environmental decisions and personal-level environmental values and behaviors. 4. For environmental protection to become a reality, it is important for societies to develop each of these areas that, together, will inform and drive environmental decisions. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 22 Exercise No. 1c Coherence > Order of Ideas 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 23 Coherence > Order of Ideas > Click! 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 24 Coherence · How? > How can you guide your reader through your text? 1. Ordering ideas in logical and expected ways 2. Using transitional expressions to interconnect ideas 3. Using parallel forms 4. Repeating key words and phrases as needed 5. Focusing on information flow 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 25 Basic relationships between ideas > Addition > Cause & effect > Comparison > Concession > Contrast > Emphasis > Example > Exception > Summary > Time sequence 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 26 Exercise No. 2a Coherence > Transitions 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 27 Coherence > Transitions > __________ using transitional expressions may seem like the single best way to produce a coherent text, it is _________ only one of the many strategies ________ employed by good writers. __________ ___ using transitions, good writers _______ focus on the order their ideas are presented in. ______________, the correct usage of parallel forms is a vital component ____. _________, if you wish to produce a great text, you must be able to tackle a variety of issues at the same time and, _________, be able to keep an open mind, _________ you will always run into unexpected problems – ________ you plan ahead! 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 28 Coherence > Transitions > Although using transitional expressions may seem like the single best way to produce a coherent text, it is in fact only one of the many strategies generally employed by good writers. In addition to using transitions, good writers also focus on the order their ideas are presented in. Furthermore, the correct usage of parallel forms is a vital component too. In short, if you wish to produce a great text, you must be able to tackle a variety of issues at the same time and, above all, be able to keep an open mind, because you will always run into unexpected problems – even if you plan ahead! 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 29 Exercise No. 2b Coherence > Transitions 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 30 Paragraph Coherence > Transitions Medical science has succeeded in identifying the hundreds of viruses that can cause the common cold. It has _______ discovered the most effective means of prevention. One person transmits cold viruses to another most often by hand. _____________, an infected person covers his mouth to cough. ________ he picks up the telephone. ________________, his daughter picks up the _________ telephone. _____________, she rubs her eyes. _______________, she, _________, has a cold. _____________ it spreads. To avoid colds, ____________, people should wash their hands often and keep their hands away from their faces. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 31 Paragraph Coherence > Transitions Medical science has succeeded in identifying the hundreds of viruses that can cause the common cold. It has also discovered the most effective means of prevention. One person transmits cold viruses to another most often by hand. For instance, an infected person covers his mouth to cough. Then he picks up the telephone. Subsequently, his daughter picks up the same telephone. Afterwards, she rubs her eyes. Within a few days, she, too, has a cold. Thus it spreads. To avoid colds, therefore, people should wash their hands often and keep their hands away from their faces. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 32 Exercise No. 2c Coherence > Transitions 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 33 Paragraph Coherence > Transitions Shopping at K-Mart enriches my vocabulary. __________ I don't like spending money, I like shopping ____________ it gives me a chance to practice my English. K-Mart is the best place to practice. _____________ it is a large store, there are many customer assistants who speak English fluently. I look for many items in the store,_______ in each area I find a different customer assistant who is eager to help me practice English. __________, I am careful to read the section names of the various parts of the store, _______ I read the information on the packages of the items that I want to buy; ____________, every time I shop at K-Mart, I leave the store with some new words that increase my English vocabulary. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 34 Paragraph Coherence > Transitions Shopping at K-Mart enriches my vocabulary. Although (even though) I don't like spending money, I like shopping because (since, as) it gives me a chance to practice my English. K-Mart is the best place to practice. Since (because, as) it is a large store, there are many customer assistants who speak English fluently. I look for many items in the store, and (so) in each area I find a different customer assistant who is eager to help me practice English. Also (in addition, furthermore, moreover), I am careful to read the section names of the various parts of the store, so (and) I read the information on the packages of the items that I want to buy; in fact (indeed, as a matter of fact, as a result), every time I shop at K-Mart, I leave the store with some new words that increase my English vocabulary. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 35 Coherence · How? > How can you guide your reader through your text? 1. Ordering ideas in logical and expected ways 2. Using transitional expressions to interconnect ideas 3. Using parallel forms 4. Repeating key words and phrases as needed 5. Focusing on information flow 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 36 Exercise No. 3a Coherence > Parallel Structures 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 37 Coherence > Parallel Forms I > Mary likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a bike. > Mary likes hiking, swimming, and biking. > In English class, Paul learned to read poems critically and he appreciated good prose. > In English class, Paul learned to read poems critically and to appreciate good prose. > Raoul's motivation to succeed in this program seems to be greater than his sister’s. > Raoul's motivation to succeed in this program seems to be greater than his sister. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 38 Coherence > Parallel Forms II > He was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for the exam, completed his lab problems in a careless manner, and his motivation was low. > He was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for the exam, completed his lab problems in a careless manner, and lacked motivation. > The dictionary is useful for these purposes: to find word meanings, pronunciations, correct spellings, and irregular verbs. > The dictionary is useful for these purposes: to find word meanings, pronunciations, correct spellings, and looking up irregular verbs. > The dictionary is useful for these purposes: to find word meanings, to find pronunciations, to find correct spellings, and to find irregular verbs. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 39 Exercise No. 3b Coherence > Parallel Structures 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 40 Coherence > Parallel Forms > Smith worked at the English Department and wanted to become the Head. This was because he wanted more money. Status was also something he desired. Another strong motivation was that he didn’t want to teach so many hours. But he never got the job because of his terrible English. The fact that the Dean didn’t like him was another reason. So he stayed at the English Department as an ordinary teacher and spent most of his time teaching Pragmatics. He also liked to surf the Internet for hours. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 41 Coherence > Parallel Forms > Smith worked at the English Department and wanted to become the Head. > This was because he wanted more money. > Status was also something he desired. > Another strong motivation was that he didn’t want to teach so many hours. > But he never got the job because of his terrible English. > The fact that the Dean didn’t like him was another reason. > So he stayed at the English Department as an ordinary teacher and spent most of his time teaching Pragmatics. > He also liked to surf the Internet for hours. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 42 Coherence > Parallel Forms > It is not terrible but it could be improved by using parallel structures in three different places: > to express why Smith wanted to become the Head > to explain why he didn’t get the job > to describe his activities as an ordinary teacher 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 43 Coherence > Parallel Forms > Smith worked at the English Department and wanted to become the Head. > This was because he wanted more money. > Status was also something he desired. > Another strong motivation was that he didn’t want to teach so many hours. > But he never got the job because of his terrible English. > The fact that the Dean didn’t like him was another reason. > So he stayed at the English Department as an ordinary teacher and spent most of his time teaching Pragmatics. > He also liked to surf the Internet for hours. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 44 Coherence > Parallel Forms Smith, an ordinary teacher at the English Department, wanted to become the Head because________________ __________________________________________________ _____________________. However, he never got the job because (of) _______________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________. Therefore, he stayed at the Department as an ordinary teacher, spending _________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 45 Coherence · How? > How can you guide your reader through your text? 1. Ordering ideas in logical and expected ways 2. Using transitional expressions to interconnect ideas 3. Using parallel forms 4. Repeating key words and phrases as needed 5. Focusing on information flow 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 46 Theme and Rheme > In order for a paragraph to be easy to read, the information in it must flow easily from one sentence to the next. > The terms theme and rheme refer to how information is distributed in a sentence. If information is carefully distributed, it enhances the coherence of a text. > Theme = known information > Rheme = new information 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 47 Theme and Rheme 1. I live in Prague. Prague is the largest city in the Czech Republic. 2. I live in Prague. The largest city in the Czech Republic is Prague. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 48 Theme and Rheme 1. In the past 60 years, as many as 65 different classification systems have been developed to define the dimensions of leadership. The scheme proposed by Bass (1990, pp. 11-20) is one such classification system. 2. In the past 60 years, as many as 65 different classification systems have been developed to define the dimensions of leadership. One such classification system is the scheme proposed by Bass (1990, pp. 11-20). 3. In the past 60 years, as many as 65 different classification systems have been developed to define the dimensions of leadership. Bass (1990, pp. 11-20) proposed such a classification system. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 49 Theme and Rheme Darwin’s The Origin of Species published in 1859 was hugely influential in the field of science and in society in general. Indeed it has often been referred to as the ‘book that shook the world’. The book outlined how there could be a relatively gradual change in the characteristics of successive generations of a species and that higher plants and animals evolved slowly over time from lower beings. This evolution occurred as a result of competition within local interacting communities. Darwin’s book helped throw the idea that there was a complete difference between humans and the animal world into turmoil as he reinforced the suggestion that humans evolved from lower beings. Prior to this it was believed in the western world, based on biblical works, that humans were created superior to other beings. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 50 Theme and Rheme > 1 > The complete electrical behaviour of any valve or transistor can be described by stating the interrelation of the currents and the voltages between all the electrodes. These relationships can conveniently be displayed graphically, and the various curves are known as the ‘characteristics’ of the device. In principle, all the characteristics should be available to the designer proposing to use the device in a circuit. behaviour interrelation relationships characteristics characteristics available to designer 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 51 Theme and Rheme > 2 > Anthropology is the study of humankind, especially of Homo sapiens, the biological species to which we human beings belong. It is the study of how our species evolved from more primitive organisms; it is also the study of how our species developed a mode of communication known as language and a mode of social life known as culture. It is the study of how culture evolved and diversified. And finally, it is the study of how culture, people, and nature interact wherever human beings are found. anthropology study of humankind anthropology how species evolved anthropology development of language and culture anthropology how culture evolved anthropology how they interact 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 52 Exercise No. 4a Coherence > Theme & Rheme 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 53 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > Every substance contains a certain amount of heat, even a relatively cold substance such as ice. The substance's molecules are in continual motion and, by this motion, possess kinetic energy which produces heat. The average kinetic energy of the molecules are measured by temperature. Cooling to the point at which molecular movement ceases completely should thus be possible. Scientists are very interested in this point, absolute zero, but it is in practice unattainable. At temperatures close to absolute zero some materials exhibit remarkable properties, such as superconductivity and superfluidity. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 54 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > Every substance contains a certain amount of heat, even a relatively cold substance such as ice. > The substance's molecules are in continual motion and, by this motion, possess kinetic energy which produces heat. > The average kinetic energy of the molecules are measured by temperature. > Cooling to the point at which molecular movement ceases completely should thus be possible. > Scientists are very interested in this point, absolute zero, but it is in practice unattainable. > At temperatures close to absolute zero some materials exhibit remarkable properties, such as superconductivity and superfluidity. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 55 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > Every substance contains a certain amount of heat, even a relatively cold substance such as ice. > The heat is the result of the continual motion of the substance's molecules which, by that motion, possess kinetic energy. > Temperature is a measurement of the average kinetic energy of the molecules. > The cooler a substance becomes the less its molecules move. > Thus it should be possible to continue cooling to the point at which molecular movement ceases completely. > This point, absolute zero, is of great interest to scientists but in practice is unattainable. > At temperatures close to absolute zero some materials exhibit remarkable properties, such as superconductivity and superfluidity. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 56 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > Every substance contains a certain amount of heat, even a relatively cold substance such as ice. The heat is the result of the continual motion of the substance's molecules which, by that motion, possess kinetic energy. Temperature is a measurement of the average kinetic energy of the molecules. The cooler a substance becomes the less its molecules move. Thus it should be possible to continue cooling to the point at which molecular movement ceases completely. This point, absolute zero, is of great interest to scientists but in practice is unattainable. At temperatures close to absolute zero some materials exhibit remarkable properties, such as superconductivity and superfluidity. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 57 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > The most striking example of value rigidity I can think of is the old south Indian Monkey Trap, which depends on value rigidity for its effectiveness. A hollowed-out coconut chained to a stake makes the trap. A monkey can put its hand through a small hole in the coconut and grab some rice inside. The monkey can put its hand into the hole but cannot take its fist out with rice in it. The monkey's value rigidity traps it when it reaches in. The rice cannot be revalued. He cannot see that freedom without rice is more valuable than capture with it. > Robert Pirsig: Zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 58 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > The most striking example of value rigidity I can think of is the old south Indian Monkey Trap, which depends on value rigidity for its effectiveness. > He cannot see that freedom without rice is more valuable than capture with it. 1. A hollowed-out coconut chained to a stake makes the trap. 2. A monkey can put its hand through a small hole in the coconut and grab some rice inside. 3. The monkey can put its hand into the hole but cannot take its fist out with rice in it. 4. The monkey's value rigidity traps it when it reaches in. 5. The rice cannot be revalued. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 59 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > The most striking example of value rigidity I can think of is the old south Indian Monkey Trap, which depends on value rigidity for its effectiveness. > He cannot see that freedom without rice is more valuable than capture with it. 1. A hollowed-out coconut chained to a stake makes the trap. 2. A monkey can put its hand through a small hole in the coconut and grab some rice inside. 3. The monkey can put its hand into the hole but cannot take its fist out with rice in it. 4. The monkey's value rigidity traps it when it reaches in. 5. The rice cannot be revalued. > The trap consists of a hollowed-out coconut chained to a stake. > The coconut has some rice inside which can be grabbed through a small hole. > The hole is big enough so that the monkey's hand can go in, but too small for his fist with rice in it to come out. > The monkey reaches in and is suddenly trapped - by nothing more than his own value rigidity. > He can't revalue the rice. 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 60 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > The most striking example of value rigidity I can think of is the old south Indian Monkey Trap, which depends on value rigidity for its effectiveness. 1. The trap consists of a hollowed-out coconut chained to a stake. 2. The coconut has some rice inside which can be grabbed through a small hole. 3. The hole is big enough so that the monkey's hand can go in, but too small for his fist with rice in it to come out. 4. The monkey reaches in and is suddenly trapped - by nothing more than his own value rigidity. 5. He can't revalue the rice. > He cannot see that freedom without rice is more valuable than capture with it. > (Robert Pirsig: Zen and the art of motorcyclemaintenance) 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 61 Exercise No. 4b Coherence > Theme & Rheme 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 62 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > Hemp’s environmental credentials are indisputable. Hemp grows better in organic systems than in conventional ones. It smothers weeds and controls pests, clearing the land for other crops. It improves the structure of the soil, with strong roots to prevent erosion. If processed in the field, it returns nutrients to the land and purports to ‘clean up’ soil contaminated with heavy metals. In fact, it is one of a minority of textile-fibre crops that can be grown in temperate climates. So why, given its potential, is so little hemp used today? Hemp’s credentials indisputable Hemp grows better in organic systems It [Hemp] smothers weeds and controls pests It [Hemp] improves structure of soil It [Hemp] cleans up the soil It [Hemp] grows in temperate climates Hemp why not used today? 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 63 Coherence > Theme and Rheme > The inventor of the diode valve was Fleming. He made use of the fact, first noticed by Edison, that an electric current could be made to flow across the empty space between the hot filament of an electric lamp and another metal electrode placed inside the evacuated bulb. This effect depends upon the thermionic emission of electrons from the heated metal filament. Inventor of diode Fleming He made use of the fact that... This effect depends on thermionic emission 18.03.2021 Mgr. David Konecny / RECETOX 64